Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/CT-327/Legends (second nomination)

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CT-327

  • Nominated by: JangFett (Talk) 00:23, May 22, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Been working on this for a while now

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 15:26, May 22, 2010 (UTC)
  2. IRC review FTW! And pipelink meter! :P -- 1358 (Talk) 18:54, May 23, 2010 (UTC)
    User:Thedandyandy1 17:25 May 24, 2010 (UTC) (Stricken per WP:SIV. -- 1358 (Talk) 17:48, May 24, 2010 (UTC))
  3. JMAS Jolly Trooper Hey, it's me! 04:48, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 04:59, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Looks good. TK-299 (Click Here) Imperial Emblem 10:24, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:47, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:07, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Lee attacks one of his old projects
  • Please mention that the droid killed him from behind.
    • It's fine as it is. I don't want to add too much detail, because will be pbp.
  • Do we really know that he expressed that nothing occured often. He says that only one time.
    • Addressed
  • All from me. Lee over and out. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:10, May 22, 2010 (UTC)
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  • "during the Clone Wars, CT-327 and a group of clone troopers were stationed in a remote Republic listening post located on the the moon of Rishi, due to the Republic's need of watching Confederate activity in the Outer Rim." This sentence is exactly the same as the one in the intro. Please vary it up. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:12, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
    • Just as an FYI, I made a few minor wording tweaks to parts that read awkwardly. It is no longer identical. - JMAS Jolly Trooper Hey, it's me! 21:20, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
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  • After a few wording tweaks I made, I have just a couple minor things. Last sentence of first paragraph in the Bio section: During one of his patrols, CT-327 reported the status of his location to the stationed clone troopers inside the base. This seems a little too PbP to me. Might as well put in that he then breathed in, then breathed out, then breathed in again. In other words, checking in was part of his routine duties, there's no need to comment on it. I'd suggest either removing the sentence altogether, or adjusting to mention that checkinging in regularly to report his status was part of his routine duties. That is evidenced by his superiors later reaction when he didn't.
    • Addressed
  • Following that, in the second paragraph, you could then mention that it was his lack of reporting in that alerted the base commander's suspicions, but it was ultimately too late to prevent the droid takeover.
    • Addressed
  • That's all from me. - JMAS Jolly Trooper Hey, it's me! 21:20, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review, JMAS. :) JangFett (Talk) 04:34, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:09, June 1, 2010 (UTC)