Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/CT-1226

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CT-1226

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 12:10, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Another Warfare one

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 18:35, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 01:39, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:16, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
  4. —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:43, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 01:07, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Object

  • The image caption - are you sure isn't a view from inside CT-1226's helmet? I always regarded it as a close up of the T-visor and a reflection.
    • Now that you say that, that makes sense. Better?
  • A note - using the full, formal designations of stuff like AT-TEs and Hailfire droids upon first mention is desirable. I've caught some, but review the article to make sure I didn't miss any, and keep it in mind for future articles. - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:38, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
    • Found one you missed and fixed it. Thanks for looking over all my good artice noms. 501st dogma(talk) 11:32, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Is "staticky" a real word? I would consider using another word.
    • That's the word Warfare uses, so I used it too. If there's still a problem with the word, I can change it if you want.
  • Context on Geonosian Debriefing Vol. III.
    • There's no more context in the book.
  • Is there a good quote for the BTS in the endnotes?--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 14:48, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
    • Done, and thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 15:10, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • "The missile ended up hitting the same Hailfire that had passed over the crater, instead of going over its head, causing the droid to explode into bits, causing CT-1226 to duck as pieces of the droid rained down." This is borderlining on being a run-on with the clauses stockpiled the way they are. Please reword for better flow.
    • Better?
  • "When he saw battalions of droids coming at them after deployment": who is "them"?
    • Fixed.
  • Please watch linking next time—there was a significant amount of underlinking in the article. CC7567 (talk) 04:23, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 12:04, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:07, July 19, 2012 (UTC)