Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/C'borp

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C'borp

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 04:29, March 12, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: All power to the mighty Slugman.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote—Tommy 9281 07:28, March 14, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Heil to the Slugman! --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:10, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 11:33, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
  4. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 22:04, March 16, 2010 (UTC)
  5. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 23:18, March 18, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:29, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Skippy laughed out loud with the Nomination Comment
    • Per the Bio quote, C'borp is on a first-name basis with his captain; I think this deserves mention as it suggests either a personal friendship with him or a lack of professionality of the crew (depending on the behievor of other crewbeings)
      • Eh. I wouldn't assume anything. It's C'borp's only quote in all of the Star Wars canon, and its nowhere stated that C'borp has a personal friendship with Stonebone.
    • Three sources are not referenced in the body. No new info from any of those? Seriously?
      • Nope. None. They're all just short rehashes of what he did on the Starjacker.
    • Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:34, March 12, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Cav:
    • Due to knowledge gained from a previous excursion to Ambria - do we have an article for this event? If so, it must be linked to. If not, and it is notable enough, it should be created and linked to.
      • I created an article yesterday, but I forgot to link it. Done.
    • Some information on the ultimate resolution to the mission after C'borp's death would be appreciated. - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 17:01, March 14, 2010 (UTC)
      • Added.
  3. Naru
    • "Although Dreebo quickly moved to attack the Marauder Starjacker, every shot he fired missed; taking the opportunity, C'borp fired back at Dreebo, destroying the enforcer's starfighter." The semicolon seems misplaced here. Rephrase, perhaps?
      • Nah, I think its fine there. The reason I put it there was to split the sentence without making them into two, choppy individual sentences.
    • NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 19:15, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
  4. NaruHina... hmmm... Soresakashi? Makaresu? Sigh. Soresu will have to do for now.
    • While serving on the Marauder Starjacker, C'borp took his position at the laser turrets to fire on an Ithullian ore hauler commanded by Captain Gruna. Could you provide a dab on context as to how at complete random starts to fire at the hauler? Maybe just explain that they were attempting to steal the ore it contained? SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 08:14, March 16, 2010 (UTC)
      • Addressed.
  5. Toprawa:
    • Who knew of this? Please specify: "it was known that the Adegan crystals were being kept" Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:54, March 17, 2010 (UTC)
      • Addressed.

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:29, March 19, 2010 (UTC)