Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Bursk

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Bursk

  • Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 17:43, June 8, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Part of the unfortunate group whose deaths were caused by C-3PO, among others.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Nice job, Hanzo.--LelalMekha 17:50, June 8, 2012 (UTC)
  2. 501st dogma(talk) 14:43, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 01:20, June 15, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 18:30, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Definitely deserves to be a good article! --The Lampshade... (talk) 20:11, June 25, 2012 (UTC)Lamp774
  6. Inqvote Menkooroo 22:11, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Object

105th
  • Context for Galactic civil war in Bio.
    • Done.
  • If he was part of Blizzard force during the assualt, it needs to be added to affiliation in the info box.
    • I've seen infoboxes with and without the subaffiliations (for example I've seen plenty that just list Galactic Empire as their affiliation). Nonetheless, I've decided to add them based on your objection.
      • Ok, feel free to change it back if someone else objects about that.
  • Some context for the Wampas, such as carniverrous or dangerous to explain more why they killed the troopers.
  • Good work. 501st dogma(talk) 12:08, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
  • One last thing. I am not sure about the description of Vader. "Supreme Commander Dark Lord of the Sith Darth Vader's" does not flow very well, so try to remedy that. 501st dogma(talk) 14:37, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
Return of the Jedi
  • IIRC, this deleted scene is included in the bonus features of the Star Wars blu-ray set. Could you please at least add a little bit about that in the BTS? Good work otherwise.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 02:05, June 14, 2012 (UTC)
    • Oh ok cool. Does that clip actually show all the snowtroopers getting killed, or is it like the Youtube clip LelalMekha showed me, which only shows one of them being attacked by the Wampa? Hanzo Hasashi 13:24, June 14, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
  • By that time, Bursk had become one of the Imperial Supreme Commander, Dark Lord of the Sith Darth Vader's, most seasoned and well-trained troops. - Bursk was Vader's property? This sentence seems to imply so.
  • You mention he is armed with a blaster, but no mention of snowtrooper armor? - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:57, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
C-3PO will KILL YOU
  • Stormtrooper Corps is exclusive to the infobox. However, our article on Stormtrooper Corps says that it's not part of the Imperial Army.
    • As a stormtrooper, he belongs to the Stormtrooper Corps.
      • OK, but my objection was that that info is infobox-exclusive, and if he's in the Stormtrooper Corps then he's not in the Imperial Army according to our article on Stormtrooper Corps. Menkooroo 21:34, June 25, 2012 (UTC)
  • The intro says that he's the leader of "one of" the most brutal snowtrooper platoons, but the body leaves out "one of" and makes it sound like he leads all of the most brutal platoons.
    • Fixed.
  • The bit about him having become one of the most seasoned and well-trained troops seems kind of random stuck in the middle of the description of the Battle of Hoth --- the "by that time" kind of reads as if he didn't become a well-trained troop until halfway through the battle. Should it maybe be placed before the description of the battle? Also, a quick note of it wouldn't be out of place in P&T, I think.
    • Relocated, and also added to P & T too.
  • Should "One Step Ahead" be in the Appearances section? Should it be referenced instead of the Galaxy Guide? Menkooroo 19:46, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:32, June 26, 2012 (UTC)


    • My apology for accidently voting twice. I wanted to vote for the Narthax nom actually. :$ --LelalMekha 21:42, June 25, 2012 (UTC)