Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Broon Ters

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Broon Ters

• Nominated by: Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:17, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Oh boy, this was a fun article to write. Sure thought it would be a CA.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Cheers for blatant plagiarism! NaruHina ^Talk 01:59, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
2. I had a classmate named Arun, and a professor who liked to pronounce his name this way. :P Hanzo Hasashi 15:06, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
3. —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 05:49, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
4. —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:23, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
5. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:26, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
6. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:37, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. Naru has a bad habit of neglecting things
   • Context on Het in the intro.
     • Added.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:40, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
   • "Broon Ters was an individual who played a gambling card game called pazaak at some point against the Twi'lek Doton Het, who was alive around the time of the Dark Wars, a series of conflicts between the Galactic Republic and the remnants of the Sith Empire." Run-on sentence. NaruHina ^Talk 16:56, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
     • Fixed.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:40, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Kasra

• Don't think it'll hurt to mention the Dark Wars in the intro.
  • Added.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:05, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
• Other than that, looks solid to me. Let's go, WP:KOTOR.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 16:05, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:05, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Cav

• Broon Ters was an individual alive at the same time as the Twi'lek Doton Het, who lived during the Dark Wars, a string of conflicts fought between the remnants of the Sith Empire and the Galactic Republic. - this sentence is kinda long. Any chance you can break it up a little? - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:40, May 23, 2012 (UTC)
  • I'm sorry, but I don't see how I can break this up effectively without having a sentence just for the description of the Dark Wars. Any suggestions?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:07, May 23, 2012 (UTC)
    • On reflection, I guess you can't, and I can't think of a way either. Disregard! - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:37, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:37, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

• And yes this is canon!--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:17, May 19, 2012 (UTC)