Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Brolsam

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Brolsam

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:21, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I'm wondering if ...

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Support

1. I just... Aqua Unasi 12:43, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
2. But I… Graestan^(Talk) 00:17, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
3. Soresumakashi 05:47, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
4. Kind regards, Pranay Sobusk ~ Talk to me 19:13, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:09, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

1. Same as my Torize objection. Soresumakashi 11:37, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
   • Varied it more. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 23:23, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
2. Toprawa:
   • I do have some concern over the infobox picture. It doesn't really illustrate anything about the planet. It's just a dot on a map. If you're going to keep the infobox picture, at least include a scaled back version of that map that gives some geographical context to where the planet lies in relation to other planets, hyperlanes, etc.
     • Added a map of the Trition Trade Route.
   • As brief as the information is, I'd like to see the bits that discuss the planet's culture found in the "Description" section incorporated into an "Inhabitants" section, per the Layout Guide.
     • Moved into a separate Inhabitants section.
   • Likewise, the geographical information in the "Locations" section should at least be duplicated/merged into the "Descriptions" section. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:23, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
     • Merged in Description, and Locations section removed. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:59, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

Comments

• Love the infobox picture ;) Aqua Unasi 12:43, 15 September 2008 (UTC)