Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Bouncer (clone trooper)

< Wookieepedia:Good article nominations
The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Bouncer (clone trooper)

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 18:50, February 15, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I bet you're all tired of my clone trooper noms. Well, there are only a few left. I promise.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. I'm not tired. Always open for more! Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:50, February 16, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Holocron Greatholocron (Complain) 21:03, February 16, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 19:23, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ah, season one. 1358 (Talk) 17:38, March 11, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:22, March 11, 2011 (UTC)
  6. ~ SavageBob 00:07, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Holocron
  • Something's wrong with that picture in the middle of the article. Wrong in this case meaning it's not there. Just my computer? Holocron Greatholocron (Complain) 10:11, February 16, 2011 (UTC)
    • It appears so. Looks fine to me. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 12:22, February 16, 2011 (UTC)
      • Well, I can hardly object to something's that's my fault. Anyway, it's back now. Holocron Greatholocron (Complain) 21:03, February 16, 2011 (UTC)
Jujiggum
  • Please relate the second paragraph of the bio to Bouncer a bit more; he's not mentioned even once in that paragraph as is.
    • How does it look now? Nothing much to say about Bouncer at that point, I'm afraid; it's all really just context necessary to set the stage for the rest of the bio.
  • Why did the clone officers think that a droid obsessed with cleaning was a Confederate spy?
    • Addressed.
  • "During their search for the droid, Bouncer inquired if the clone officers did the same at every inspection…" Did the same what? Randomly hunt down cleaning droids? Did Bouncer think it was some kind of drill, maybe? Otherwise, this doesn't make much sense; and it's not really clear here whether Bouncer knew that it was a spy or not.
    • Changed to your wording regarding random droid hunts :) It's not clear in the comic whether Bouncer knew that the droid was a spy.
  • I think a quote regarding the events at the station would be appropriate in the bio section
    • Addressed.
  • That's all; nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 22:42, March 3, 2011 (UTC)
Prepare to be savaged...
  • I was confused by the first mention of "tracking station." I didn't know if they tracked ships, animals, criminals, stock prices, etc. Could it be rephrased to give more context? Also, "stationed at a tracking station" is one too many stations in close proximity. :)
    • Addressed and addressed.
  • I realize he's a clone, but it seems odd that his hair and eye color in the infobox are being sourced to the DB rather than to the comic. Could that be changed?
    • D'oh! I meant to source it to the comic. Fixed.
  • Again, what were they tracking? The bio doesn't say.
    • Check this now.
  • Can you use the citeweb template instead of a hard link in the last sentence of "BTS"?
    • Addressed.
  • That's it. Good work! ~ SavageBob 07:20, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • "…was assigned to the local tracking station, which was assigned to warn the…" "assigned" gets repetitive.
  • "The Pastil station was maintained by an MSE-series droid…" This is a bit misleading; the droid was not the only maintainer of the station. 1358 (Talk) 21:29, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:09, March 12, 2011 (UTC)