Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Bonadan alloy heavy suit

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Bonadan alloy heavy suit

  • Nominated by: Jedi Order SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 03:37, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This was supposed to be a CAnom how did I get here??
  • Date Archived: 05:49, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 932 words (106 introduction, 496 body, 330 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 803 words (92 introduction, 424 body, 287 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:KOTOR WP:VG

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Support

  1. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 19:39, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 18:34, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 03:26, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 05:48, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

Object

ThrawnChiss
  • Alternate names should be noted in the body as well as the intro.
  • If the names for the suit don't originate in KOTOR and instead in the campaign guides, that should be mentioned in the body.
    • I misspoke here, I meant to say that alternate names, as well as misspellings, need to be noted in the "Behind the scenes" section of the article. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 22:49, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
  • You're using {{ID}} incorrectly. The first source to identify a new name for a subject uses {{1stID}}.ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 13:42, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed! As for the {{ID}} on the Prima guide one, I put that there because the book misspells it (Bonadan vs Bonadon). The name "Bonadan alloy heavy suit" comes directly from the game. The one letter is hard to notice but I couldn't think of a way to make it more obvious. Jedi Order SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 15:08, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
      • Without a {{Misidentified}} template or shortening it to just "Bonadon," at least. Jedi Order SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 15:55, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
Lew
  • Per the manual of style links shouldn't be included in the first instances of the article's names, so the Bonadan alloy, suit, and armor links should be moved to the first instance outside of the two names in description Lewisr (talk) 21:58, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
  • On your other noms, you cite Kebla being female to a different source than the game Lewisr (talk) 21:58, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Iziz, Khoonda, and Dantooine could use some context in the BTS Lewisr (talk) 21:58, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Jedi Order SHCosmos (He/Him ✦ Talk) 08:16, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
spookly
  • I'd like to see the BBY dates introduced in the intro; mostly per precedent, under the reasoning of trying to give the reader a quick grasp of the article as a whole, which includes the dates so they can contextualize the timeframe.—spookywillowwtalk 03:25, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
    • Boop, there we go. Jedi Order SHCosmos (He/Him ✦ Talk) 16:39, 9 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:49, 10 May 2024 (UTC)