Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Bombing on Naboo

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Bombing on Naboo

Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 18:00, 4 June 2025 (UTC)
Nomination comments: My first GA nom in exactly a year, and it's a juicy one
Date Archived: 03:50, 3 August 2025 (UTC)
Final word count: 737 words (120 introduction, 484 body, 133 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 732 words (113 introduction, 486 body, 133 behind the scenes)
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~~The date can be incorporated in the intro~~
- Added
~~In The bombing, I feel as though "engulfing many of both types of troopers" can be simplified to "engulfing many troopers"~~ Wok142 (talk) 20:07, 4 June 2025 (UTC)
- Was trying to be specific since both types are specified casualties in infobox, but that's fine.
~~Is this location Theed? Episode appearances include Theed but I'm not sure if that refers to the location of this bombing.~~ Wok142 (talk) 05:25, 5 June 2025 (UTC)
- I think they're assuming that because it's confirmed the location was used for the Theed Royal Palace in TPM deleted scenes, but the audio description confirms it's not the palace. Looks more like the Lake Country to me anyway. Panther436 (talk) 06:04, 5 June 2025 (UTC)
  - Makes sense. Wok142 (talk) 08:49, 5 June 2025 (UTC)
~~Does the Week 4 Trivia in Sources need the Imo? There's a photo of the convoy on the bridge in addition to the indirect mention.~~

~~This can be added to sources methinks, has a photo of them in the cafe~~
- For both of the above, I had looked at those images and just neither depict the event. I don't think we can call everything depicted in the flashback "the bombing," especially moments where they're not taking any offensive action at all, just talking, and haven't fully decided to do it.
  - Alright, if you don't feel that the immediate before or after of the moment of the bombing qualifies, then I'll strike these. Wok142 (talk) 17:30, 13 June 2025 (UTC)
~~For this one, does "the episode shifts to flashbacks, peppered with sketches of Luthen and Kleya’s history" could as an Imo? I feel like it should.~~ Wok142 (talk) 08:49, 5 June 2025 (UTC)
- I've seen bigger stretches made for imos, added. Panther436 (talk) 17:16, 5 June 2025 (UTC)

~~You can list the Bombing on Naboo as the eventually prior event. Unless that killing of a sniper has a page of its own as well to go between them~~ Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:19, 9 June 2025 (UTC)
- I'm not sure what you mean. This is the Bombing on Naboo article. Panther436 (talk) 16:42, 9 June 2025 (UTC)
  - Its been a long few weeks :P. I meant Unidentified massacre (Luthen Rael), unless the killing of the sniper that happens between has a page. if not, massacre is most recent event we know of, so "eventually" either of those Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:22, 15 June 2025 (UTC)
    - Ohh that makes sense. Added the massacre, don't think the sniper shot is really an event and isn't as relevant. Panther436 (talk) 00:33, 16 June 2025 (UTC)

~~This edit should be investigated for accuracy, and if so then implemented~~ Lewisr (talk) 19:18, 15 June 2025 (UTC)
- Edit has no basis, undone now. Panther436 (talk) 00:33, 16 June 2025 (UTC)
~~Real minor thing, but the intro has two sentences in a row which start with After, and the 3rd para of the prelude has two that start with Marki, is there a way to change one of each?~~ Lewisr (talk) 05:07, 23 July 2025 (UTC)
- Adjusted Panther436 (talk) 15:39, 23 July 2025 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:33, 3 August 2025 (UTC)