Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Blasted Asteroid (the Wheel)

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Blasted Asteroid (the Wheel)

Keep Wheelin' em in. Menkooroo (talk) 15:19, November 9, 2013 (UTC)
Since I was going to support on the CAN. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 04:10, November 10, 2013 (UTC)
Per Premier. 501st dogma^(talk) 01:10, November 11, 2013 (UTC)
<-Omicron^{(Leave a message at the BEEP!)} 02:29, November 12, 2013 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:52, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
WHEEEEEEEEL IN THE SKYYYYY KEEPS ON TURRRRRRRNIIIIIIIIN IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 04:14, December 30, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:23, January 2, 2014 (UTC)

~~Definitely a sofixit, but since the same mistake was made here in your nomcom, might as well point it out: "Its" is possessive while "it's" only means "it is." Change it in the intro, baby!~~
- Damn I thought I'd managed to fix that bad habit. Fixed it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:59, November 8, 2013 (UTC)
~~Can you mention where in the galaxy The Wheel is? If Edge of the Empire doesn't say then you can cite the Legacy Era Campaign Guide or the recent sw.com blog about the History of The Wheel.~~
- Referenced to elsewhere in the book. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:59, November 8, 2013 (UTC)
The first sentence of "Description" is a bit long and run-on --- is the context on the Galactic Civil War necessary? Since neither the Empire nor the Alliance come into play in the rest of the article, they seem like trimmable fat.
- I've not added it in other articles then been asked for context so I split the sentence instead, is that ok? Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:59, November 8, 2013 (UTC)
Loves me some Wheel. Menkooroo (talk) 01:20, November 8, 2013 (UTC)

I think a portion of the Description section deserves to go into a History section, specifically the mention that it operated during the GCW and the last sentence detailing specifics about the bouncer and Waroon Dak. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:12, December 31, 2013 (UTC)
- Split Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:58, January 2, 2014 (UTC)
~~If the correct formatting of the Wheel's name is "the Wheel" and not "The Wheel," there's no reason why "The" should be capitalized in this article's title.~~ Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:20, December 31, 2013 (UTC)
- Moved. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:58, January 2, 2014 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:23, January 2, 2014 (UTC)