Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Besh gate

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Besh gate

  • Nominated by: Winterz (talk) 22:34, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: It's been a year since my last nomination, so uh..yeah.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 06:12, January 4, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Final version looks good. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:59, January 10, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ACvote What kind of crap is this Look legit. JangFett (Talk) 02:58, January 17, 2014 (UTC)
  4. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 04:18, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:06, January 20, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Attack of the Clone
  • One or two more sentences to the intro maybe? It looks just a tad short.
    • I initially thought it would be best to leave the uncertain adventure out, but anyway, done. Let me know if you still want to raise the stakes furthermore!
      • That actually might be nice. Maybe another sentence? I know this is getting to be like fits and starts, but it would improve the intro length.
        • Increased. There's really not a lot of content to expand it considerably without approaching the body's size.
  • Context on Atlee Thanda.
    • Done.
  • Dat linking :P CC7567 (talk) 20:24, December 26, 2013 (UTC)
    • My bad. Interesting about me missing the "slavery" link though, it's something I have been writing up in my workbench for Zygerria's article, displacing that linking a thousand times over and yet now I fail to link it here. :P Winterz (talk) 20:50, December 26, 2013 (UTC)
  • "By the time of the Galactic Empire, the space station known as Besh gate was old and badly maintained, orbiting the planet Zygerria[2] in the Zygerria system, within the Outer Rim of the galaxy." This information sounds a bit like it's in reverse order, i.e. location should be the most important detail (and mentioned first) since it's constant, then anything about its condition over time. CC7567 (talk) 06:02, December 27, 2013 (UTC)
    • Done. If you're wondering why I didn't move the temporal part as well, that is because we don't know if the station is mobile or not. Winterz (talk) 01:56, January 3, 2014 (UTC)

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