Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/BesGas Three

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BesGas Three

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  1. Thefourdotelipsis 11:25, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
  2. I remember reading this in the databank way back at the beginning of What's the Story. Chack Jadson (Talk) 21:09, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
  3. Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 01:21, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
  4. Toprawa and Ralltiir 08:19, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
  5. --Eyrezer 10:24, 12 May 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. Just one thing: any information on what happened to the "organics" after the station was hijacked? Chack Jadson (Talk) 11:27, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
  2. No links for atmosphere? No links in the body for Bespin or planet? You also link to tibanna gas twice in the body.--Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 20:24, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
  3. Toprawa:
    • Without looking through this article, I can tell you that you're missing information from The Illustrated Star Wars Universe, which is actually its first appearance and is where the infobox image actually comes from. This thing was first created as part of Ralph McQuarrie's initial concept designs for the OT way back when. When I have time, I'll go through ISWU and try and see specifically what info you're missing. But, you'll need to change and add to the BTS information to explain this, as well as add ISWU to the source list. Also, I believe this creates an interesting discussion for your CT that is up. I would definitely say that, given the image of this thing within ISWU, that BesGas Three first "appears" in this book, despite being a "source." Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:31, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
    • Please elaborate a little here. I'm not quite sure what you're saying. A siphoning scandal involving money I must presume? Also, a little context for the Dark Nest would do nice: "In 36 ABY, the refinery would become involved in a siphoning scandal involving the Dark Nest."
    • Ok, I've added ISWU to the source list. It needs something, either a First mention or First appearance tag. The refinery itself isn't discussed, but this is the picture caption: "Tibanna gas refineries process and store this valuable substance on which the economy of Bespin rests (above)." If I was doing this article, I would add a {{1stm}} and an {{Imo}} tag, and then probably a (Picture only) to address the "appearance" of the image. But I guess I'm still not convinced it shouldn't have a (First appearance) tag. I think you're interpreting the appearance vs. mentioned debate too literally. The refinery certainly appears in this source. Feel free to discuss this with me in IRC. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:47, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
      • Since it has pertient text accompanying it, it's not really {{Imo}} so I've given it the mention tag.
    • Then, please adapt your BTS a little bit to explain its true origins with Ralph McQuarrie, etc.
  4. Can you add a note as to what the Life Zone means? --Eyrezer 01:53, 12 May 2008 (UTC)

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