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Battle of unidentified planet (Yoda's chaingun)

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 15:49, 2 July 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: So much for a battle. Thanks to CC for pointing this out in the comments to his nom:P

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote --Eyrezer 11:45, 6 July 2009 (UTC)
  2. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 23:42, 6 July 2009 (UTC)
  3. The name is enough to get anyone to look at this! NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 15:04, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Graestan(Talk) 01:27, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
  5. Ready for AC approval after a final copyedit. Don't forget that comic quotes use italics only for emphasis. —Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 05:57, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. Attack of the Clone
    • Can you try to get a better name for the article? Per Anakin and Obi-Wan, clones surrender, Luminara and Barriss, Yoda's charge, enslaved species, and shielded city, the current name is a bit unspecific. Yes, I do know that it took place during the Clone Wars, but so obviously did many other battles. Perhaps "Battle of unidentified planet (Yoda's chaingun)" or something similar?
      • I was thinking about that, but decided to wait for some feedback. Now moved to (Yoda's chaingun).
    • Can the "Unidentified planet (A Stranger in Town)" be moved to something with an in-universe title?
    • Are you sure that A Stranger in Town is a source for the infobox info such as the previous and next battles, as well as the date?
      • A Stranger in Town is not a source by itself, but CW Adventures: Volume 3 is. However, I have no problem with referencing the article if you want me to.
        • I have to give it a bit of thought, but I'll get back to you on this. CC7567 (talk) 19:37, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
          • I guess it's fine the way it is. CC7567 (talk) 23:42, 6 July 2009 (UTC)
    • "telling about the approaching Separatist army": telling who? Or was he just telling the entire cantina?
      • Yeah, he just ran into the cantina, screaming about the army.
        • Can you still try to reword it, though? In the way you're using it, "telling" requires a direct object for it to work. CC7567 (talk) 19:37, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
    • That's all I have for now; I'll give it another look once these are taken care of. CC7567 (talk) 05:02, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
  2. To be honest, I don't think this article warrents an Aftermath section. There is so little information in it, it may as well me tacked on to the end of the previous paragraph. Apart from that, no problems. --Eyrezer 11:01, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:15, 10 July 2009 (UTC)