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Battle of the Phu system

• Nominated by: Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 23:01, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
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Support

1. DwartiiDelver (talk) 03:53, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
2. YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 21:41, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
3. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 21:29, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 17:57, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:13, 22 November 2021 (UTC)
6. MasterFred(talk) 23:27, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Editor

• I think you can fit an image of the Malevolence in the prelude section. Maybe File:Malevolence profile.png. Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:49, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 16:57, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
• You need to swap image sides now Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:50, 5 October 2021 (UTC)

Dwartii

• Considering Mace's quote, could "Rising Malevolence" be considered as containing an indirect mention of the battle? DwartiiDelver (talk) 03:20, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
  • After discussing with an AC, the quote is a little too vague to make it in an indirect mention. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 13:54, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
• "while the heavy cruiser, one step ahead of the Republic forces, destroyed the entire task force after coming under intense fire." Currently this reads to me like the Malevolence came under intense fire rather than the task force—or is that what BMF 43 actually states? DwartiiDelver (talk) 22:39, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Reworded. I had feeling it could've been interpreted that way. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 00:34, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
• Intro could benefit from a mention of the Separatists.
• Unless I'm mistaken, I believe a reference note is needed explaining how we know the Battle of Ryloth is concurrent to this battle. DwartiiDelver (talk) 02:45, 5 October 2021 (UTC)

Yakov

• Any quote for the battle itself? It would make sense if not; just checking. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 20:13, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Nope. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 20:54, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Roger Roger. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 21:41, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

Manoof

• Aren't the clone wars episodes part of canon, regardless of when they aired? This should impact the currently missing Appearances section and BTS. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:20, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
  • It does not. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 14:29, 4 November 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Please see if my copy edit is okay
  • Looks fine.
• I don't see a need to include (orders) for Plo Koon in the infobox when that's what commanders are responsible for, even when they're not physically present OOM 224 13:41, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Removed. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 15:05, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:28, 23 November 2021 (UTC)