Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Vanquo

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Battle of Vanquo

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 03:44, August 27, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: On a trip to Cirrus Minor, saw a crater in the sun a thousand miles of moonlight later.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. 501st dogma(talk) 12:23, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 08:40, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:46, September 21, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 21:21, September 21, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Supreme Emperor (talk) 22:08, September 21, 2013 (UTC)

Object

501
  • "As the others attempted to escape, Commander Dyre used the commotion as a cover to escape the battle in their ship..." Could you say outright that he deserted his cause?
    • "Deserting his cause" is kind of misleading though... he is still devoted to the Mandalorians, he just wishes to go off and investigate on his own.
  • There are some Mandalorian forces in the infobox that are not mentioned in the body. One example is the Meteor-class Q-Carrier. 501st dogma(talk) 13:00, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • The article's mention of "scout speeders" utilizes two disambig links. I can fix the "Scout" link, but I don't know if "speeder" refers to a landspeeder or airspeeder. Alternatively, can a specific article not be created for this subject?
  • The Prelude section should have a paragraph break someplace.
  • May I ask why our article is at "The Last Resort," but this article refers to the ship as simply "Last Resort"?
  • If Cassus Fett is Mandalore's singular lieutenant, this needs a comma before "Cassus." I was unsure about the accuracy of that: "Mandalore's lieutenant Cassus Fett"
  • The BTS should mention that the KOTOR CG first identified the battle by formal name. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:49, September 17, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:10, September 21, 2013 (UTC)