- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
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Battle of N'dian
- Nominated by: Kilson(Let's have a chat) 10:43, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: My first Clone Wars battle, oddly enough.
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Support
- We need more RC-articles. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:38, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Lee attacks
Intro: hiding in one of N'dian's urban centers, but had to virtually destroy the urban center in the process. Two times "urban center" could you find a synonym for one?- Changed the second "urban center" to city.
Should the "Prelude" section be the "Aftermath" section? Otherwise that's rather funny.- Haha, yeah. Changed. Silly me. :P
- Otherwise very nice work. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:37, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Lee. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 01:35, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
- Check WP:DASH, please.
- Are the nicknames really necessary? I know that we usually use nicknames instead of formal clone designations, but in this case when the clones hardly get mentioned at all, I don't think they're necessary.
- Is the Aftermath section really needed? (And is the corresponding part in the intro necessary?) Nothing directly relevant to the battle actually happens; we usually don't include in-universe mentions of events in the text of an article unless they're significant. I'm not sure what this will do to the word count, though. CC7567 (talk) 21:53, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
Twin
Comments
After addressing some of CC's objections, the article fell below the 250 word mark. I will archive the failed nom. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 18:05, July 2, 2011 (UTC)