Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Moralan

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Battle of Moralan

Great work on the Barn Burner. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:08, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
Cool article. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 02:15, May 15, 2013 (UTC)
IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 01:29, May 22, 2013 (UTC)
Winterz (talk) 20:01, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:09, June 9, 2013 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 20:53, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

~~It might be nice for some rank context for Xim to be present in the article. Is he a commander, a general, an admiral? This is optional.~~
- I added that he considered himself Daritha is that ok? Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:21, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
~~Could you add the Third Battle of Vontor to the body somewhere briefly? This again is optional.~~
- Added in a sentence including it and Boonta's involvement. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:21, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
~~In the body of the article, you shouldn't say the Hutt-Xim conflict outright, as it is a conjectural title. A pipelinking is in order.~~
- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:21, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
Good work. 501st dogma^(talk) 22:41, May 11, 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for reading it through! Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:21, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

~~You don't need to bold stuff in the body.~~
- Woops that was left over from when I thought it would be a CA long ago. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:06, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
~~Needs Prelude and Aftermath sections. This is possible just by rearranging stuff already in the article.~~
- Split. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:06, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
Once you deal with these sections I'll give a full look. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 04:47, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for reading! Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:06, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
~~What does "Daritha" mean? Context please. Other than that, nice work.~~ IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 23:59, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
- Added context although I'm not sure if the sentence is now grammatically correct do I need to change the commas? Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:19, May 18, 2013 (UTC)
  - Yeah, the sentence is really rough to read right now. I would split the sentence in two and try to get it all straightened out. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 23:29, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
    - Any better? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:46, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
      - It is, but I went in there and changed it around a little more. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 01:29, May 22, 2013 (UTC)

~~You mention the meaning behind "Daritha" twice in the prelude.~~ - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:40, May 29, 2013 (UTC)
- Removed one but if you think it was the better of the two I'll change it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:15, May 29, 2013 (UTC)
  - I think the one you removed was the better placement. As its placed now, it seems a little tacked on and not really relevant to the text around it. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:14, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
    - Changed it to the more suitable one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:39, June 6, 2013 (UTC)

~~You alternate in the article (and the infobox) between "Moralans" and "the Moralan." Please identify which is used canonically and apply to all instances in the article for uniformity.~~
- Corrected. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:45, June 8, 2013 (UTC)
Because the title of this battle is conjectural, the items in the Sources list should each have the "Indirect mention only" tag applied to them. Otherwise, this implies that the name "Battle or Moralan" was actually mentioned within. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:31, June 8, 2013 (UTC)
- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:45, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:53, June 17, 2013 (UTC)