Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Kirrek (Unification Wars)

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Battle of Kirrek (Unification Wars)

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 04:47, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: WP:TOTJ.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Graestan^(Talk) 16:49, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
2. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 10:18, September 8, 2009 (UTC)
3. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 23:10, September 9, 2009 (UTC)
4. Please watch your tenses; writing isn't very coherent when it's switching rapidly between present and future tense. CC7567 ^(talk) 07:16, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
5. The final version looks very good. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:15, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Soresu
   • "to unify the seven worlds of the Koros system" occurs in two sentences consecutively. Please vary it up.
     • Addressed.
   • Is the quote in the aftermath section meant to be "your battle meditation"? SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 01:41, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
     • Yes. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 15:18, September 7, 2009 (UTC)
2. Toprawa:
   • I notice immediately that there is a discrepancy between this article and the Teta article (currently an FA) over what year she becomes Empress. Considering both of these articles will be status articles, this isn't a good thing. Please figure this out and get these two articles on the same page. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:08, September 25, 2009 (UTC)
     • I've checked the Teta article, and the two are now on the same page. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 23:28, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:15, October 12, 2009 (UTC)