Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Cadinth

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Battle of Cadinth

  • Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 05:47, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: It's the No Country for Old Men of Wook articles.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Nothing beyond minor stuff. CC7567 (talk) 06:01, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
  2. Good job. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi beacon) 01:31, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote --Eyrezer 10:11, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
  4. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 08:56, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:15, 7 May 2009 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Grunny (Talk) 08:32, 16 May 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. The Grand Master
    • Intro and History: "galactic frontier" is somewhat unclear. Please reword or explain.
      • This is left unclear in the source as well.
    • Not really an objection, but I would suggest making stubs for Observation Post W-16 and Republic Core Base just so you don't have unecessary redlinks on the page.
      • Stub created for Observation Post W-16.
    • Intro: "before the Republic could even respond in kind" is somewhat awkward and unclear; please reword.
      • Reworded.
    • History: You mention the "Republic Core Base" once, but later the "Republic Core base". Should the "b" in "base" be capitalized or not?" Please fix whichever one is incorrect.
      • Typo. Fixed.
    • History: "Due to the heavy amount of smoke in the area, he collapsed after making contact." This is somewhat unclear. Say that he was "knocked out by the heavy amount of smoke in the area", or smoething along those lines.
      • Tweaked.
    • You're somewhat unclear about what happened at the end of the battle. Who won? What happened when the ATATs targeted the tunnels? Did Stiels get killed? If these things are unknown, it needs to be specified as such.
      • I have already specified this with a footnote, and we generally don't put "Unknown" in any articles ever.
    • Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi beacon) 13:37, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
  2. Soresu
    • Can you try to use a word other than "effortlessly" and instead just state that it was destroyed?
      • Well...it wasn't. It was just damaged.
    • No Before, Next, Result, and Casualty sections for the infobox? I'm not exactly much of a fan of the first two, but the others should have something, such as the destruction of the tower.
    • Try to make sure everything is linked next time. I think I got most of them. Other than that, nice work as always. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 12:20, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

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