Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Bomodon

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Battle of Bomodon

• Nominated by: Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 05:25, December 18, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Winterz (talk) 23:28, December 27, 2013 (UTC)
2. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:34, January 2, 2014 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:20, January 19, 2014 (UTC)
4. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 03:05, January 19, 2014 (UTC)
5. MasterFred^(Whatever) 05:07, January 23, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Flying platoons

• In the intro "(...) during a flight over Bomodon, a platoon of Republic soldiers from the Army's 45th Infantry Division was shot down." This sounds a lot like the the platoon was flying around and was then shot down ^^. I'd recommend you put the "ship carrying x" (or within those lines) somewhere there. I understand you might have cut it in order to shorten the intro but there are other things that have lesser value there, like for how long the battle endured or to whom the planet belonged to. These would be my suggestions if you really intend to trim it down. Winterz (talk) 05:13, December 23, 2013 (UTC)
  • Very true. Changed per your suggestions. Thanks for the review. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 23:07, December 27, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:07, January 23, 2014 (UTC)