Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Bomis Koori IV

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Battle of Bomis Koori IV

  • Nominated by: JangFett (Talk) 01:06, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Yay

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Objections handled via dat magic IRC thingy. 1358 (Talk) 13:56, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Very nice, but please kill the redlink. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:38, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:20, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Nice to see an article from the good Clone Wars!--Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 03:11, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 07:33, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Small one
  • This might be a SOFIXIT, but in the infobox you refer to Kenobi and Skywalker as "Jedi High General" and "General" respectively. But in the article, I don't see them listed as that at all.--Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 03:03, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
    • It could fall in this category, but nevertheless, thanks for pointing this out. Fixed. JangFett (Talk) 03:07, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • This is rather minor, but would you mind moving the Prelude image to "The battle" section? It simply doesn't match up with the text of the article in its current placement.
  • Also, regarding the Bts: if you're going to source the airdate for Clone Wars Chapter 22, I would recommend employing conventional sourcing for all the other info instead of self-sourcing for consistency. CC7567 (talk) 22:58, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
    • Sure, both addressed. For the image, I placed it in the prelude section because the battle's quote is too large, and the insertion of an image in that same section shifts the bts heading. Will the {{clear}} template work here to fix this? Or should I just remove it. JangFett (Talk) 02:45, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
      • I personally don't care for {{Clear}} when it's unneeded, and it doesn't seem needed here. I've removed it, but feel free to re-add it if you'd really like to. Just one thing: could you find the specific CSWE entries' page numbers and cite them as separate sources? That would really be the prudent thing to do in this case instead of crowding them into the same ref. CC7567 (talk) 07:19, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
        • No, that's fine. As for the sourcing, is that better? JangFett (Talk) 07:31, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:14, October 10, 2011 (UTC)


  • A minor, yet interesting battle from the true Clone Wars show. :P Not enough information for an aftermath section and surprisingly no other CW-related source mentions the general or the battle. JangFett (Talk) 01:06, October 3, 2011 (UTC)