Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Andalia

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Battle of Andalia

• Nominated by: 501st dogma^(talk) 18:59, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:I might do the capture of Coh Veshiv some time. Seems like Far Orbit related material needs a lot of work.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:27, August 13, 2012 (UTC)
2. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:24, September 12, 2012 (UTC)
3. CC7567 ^(talk) 17:57, September 15, 2012 (UTC)
4. Plagueis327 (talk) 18:11, September 15, 2012 (UTC)
5. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:18, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi

• Is Col Veshiv an Imperial Advisor?
• "...Imperial Emperor Palpatine taught the other Grand Admirals a lesson by using Teshik as an example." This part seems a little awkward, could you reword it?
• Context on the Hapans.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:22, August 13, 2012 (UTC)
  • All done. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma^(talk) 15:08, August 13, 2012 (UTC)

Cav

• You mention the Shepherd being destroyed, then Teshik's method of survival. This needs reworking since Teshik wouldn't have survived if the ship was destroyed before he managed to escape. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:07, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
  • Fixed Teshik's sentence up a bit. How's that? 501st dogma^(talk) 11:47, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

• Please fully fill out {{WebCite}}.
  • Done.
    • Still missing "date." CC7567 ^(talk) 20:50, September 14, 2012 (UTC)
      • I couldn't find the exact date it was released, but managed to find to date when we added the link to the Wook and put that as the date. 501st dogma^(talk) 12:01, September 15, 2012 (UTC)
        • All you have to do is click on the "5 months ago" button and it'll take you to the date it was posted. Try poking around more next time. CC7567 ^(talk) 17:57, September 15, 2012 (UTC)
• Why is the snoopship listed if it didn't participate in the battle? That's what the "forces" field is for—to list people, ships, etc. that participated in the engagement.
  • Removed.
• The "Teshik remembers the Battle of Andalia" and similarly worded captions get rather overused. Please see what you can do to vary the wording. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:37, September 14, 2012 (UTC)
  • Better? Thanks for the review. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:44, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Floyd

• Link to Teshik's previous failure in the intro?
• You use the word "privateers" in consecutive sentences in Prelude. Try to avoid this kind of repetition.
• Nice work. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 19:08, September 15, 2012 (UTC)
  • Both done. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:01, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:18, September 18, 2012 (UTC)