Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle droid dispenser

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Battle droid dispenser

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool CIS roundel (talk) 04:17, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Previous CAN
  • Date Archived: 21:52, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG, WP:CIS

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Manoof
  • Still needs more detail in the history. Specifically when/how they were used in the different theatres of war. You also link to the incorrect Prosecutor attack, which relates to the initial battle when it was intercepted prior to Delta Squad's mission, rather than the mission/battle involving Delta Squad. Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 14:00, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
    • Awesome! Infinitely better, well done! :) Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:32, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
  • There should be more quotes from memory, though I could be wrong. Are you sure there's just the one? Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 14:00, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
  • For Kashyyyk, can you use the full "battle droid dispenser", reason being that other dispensers were encountered so we need to be clear Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:32, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
  • I don't think the BTS needs to be subsectioned. Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:32, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Links in quote attributes need to be removed if that link also appears in the article body/intro Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:32, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
  • I think we can specify the speeder destroyed that dispenser Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:32, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
    • I tweaked the wording to demonstrate what I meant by this Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 02:13, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Ref 3 can use ref 5 Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:32, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
    • As in ref 5 can be used in its place, so you'll need to update the ref 3 with the full ref 5, and update the current first use of ref 5 as a second use. Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 02:13, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • The separate named hangars can use their own articles (similar to Laundry room 346) Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:32, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
  • The game text sections need to be in the correct part of the history. So the one with the speeder needs to be moved prior to when they go to Hangar D Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:32, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
  • We could use additional images Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:32, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Have a read through of the article in full once you make the above changes, and check 1) linking (I try searching every noun) 2)tense (there's a few spots that use present or future tense) and 3) spelling/grammar (I tend to run larger articles like this through a word processor) Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:32, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Adressed. I may need another week to get all the images though. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel (talk) 22:31, 1 February 2023 (UTC)
      • Added images. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 23:29, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
        • I haven't struck this last one yet until I can have a look on my laptop :) Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 02:18, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • The mention that they were utilized by the confederacy can be moved out of description (it's already noted in history but this relates to WHEN it was used, not about it specifically) Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 10:58, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • First battle of Geonosis, why did delta squad separate? And "the ensuing blaster fire" indicates they reunited THEN had a firefight. With whom and is this correct? Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 10:58, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Is "Ras Prosecutor" capitalised correctly? Was Ras an acronym, if so it needs to be spelt out in the first use (eg "United States of America (USA)") Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 10:58, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Did the droid control ship come out of hyperspace to finish the salvaging job or to assist the trandoshans against Delta squad? Do we actually know? Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 10:58, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • The Hangar articles don't need the parenthetical disambiguation if there is no article at the main title (eg "Hangar B" instead of "Hangar B (Prosecutor)") Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 10:58, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • "En route to Hangar D, the squad was advised..." by whom? Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 10:58, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • BTS notes that it doesn't deploy more than 3 droids at a time, which is redundant to the description part of the body Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 10:58, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • "four battle enemies" this is supposed to be battle droid enemies right, I can't remember if there were B2s as well in this part... Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 10:58, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Check the word count of this once you've done the above, as it may go into FAN territory Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 10:58, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
    • Addressed all except the following: 1) Dialogue in the game states why the droid control ship shows up 2) After the group meets up, they engage in a fight with droids. I added a part explaining why they split up. 3) Droidekas appear in that section as well. This article has gone over the word limit so I will renominate it as my first FAN. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk)

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