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Bacta grenade
- Nominated by: Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 16:01, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Healing by grenade!
(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Lee caught my only objection. 501st Dogma
(Comlink) 17:15, April 22, 2012 (UTC) - Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:54, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 01:18, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 13:15, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
--Eyrezer 00:13, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
JangFett (Talk) 00:10, May 13, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Lee' charge
Context for Bacta in the intro/body.- Done.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 22:33, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
- Done.--Exiled Jedi
- That's all. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:12, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
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Please reload your infobox. JangFett (Talk) 17:20, April 22, 2012 (UTC)- Done.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 22:33, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
- Done.--Exiled Jedi
Since the Medic profession did not favor either the Rebel or Imperial faction, any faction, or neutral players, could utilize the bacta grenade. I think it's safe to mention this in the article, rather than suggesting the Rebels was the only faction primarily using the device. JangFett (Talk) 23:17, April 30, 2012 (UTC)- I tried to make it clearer that other factions used the bacta grenades. See below why I explicityly mention the Alliance.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 23:59, April 30, 2012 (UTC)
- I'm still not seeing anything that suggests that all factions, including neutral players, could use the bacta grenade. Perhaps using the gamemechanics template to briefly describe this. In the history, by saying "Bacta grenades were used by the Alliance to Restore the Republic and other factions after the Battle of Yavin during the Galactic Civil War," Most of the pov is directed at the Rebels. Or mentioning something in the bts that says that both Rebels, Imperial, and neutral players could use the grenade, despite the TCG card suggested that the Rebels used the grenade. JangFett (Talk) 00:38, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
- How is this?--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 01:41, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
- Fact tag needs correcting. Also, basically you're repeating the same information outside the tags too in the same section. You can remove the description of the Empire/Neutral outside the gamemech tags. Or basically if you want to keep the relevant Galaxies TCG card information pertaining to the Rebels in the intro/history, while mentioning the Empire and neutral factions in the bts, that's fine too JangFett (Talk) 05:35, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry, I missed this reply for so long, I think I have it fixed now.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 12:41, May 11, 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry, I missed this reply for so long, I think I have it fixed now.--Exiled Jedi
- Fact tag needs correcting. Also, basically you're repeating the same information outside the tags too in the same section. You can remove the description of the Empire/Neutral outside the gamemech tags. Or basically if you want to keep the relevant Galaxies TCG card information pertaining to the Rebels in the intro/history, while mentioning the Empire and neutral factions in the bts, that's fine too JangFett (Talk) 05:35, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
- How is this?--Exiled Jedi
- I'm still not seeing anything that suggests that all factions, including neutral players, could use the bacta grenade. Perhaps using the gamemechanics template to briefly describe this. In the history, by saying "Bacta grenades were used by the Alliance to Restore the Republic and other factions after the Battle of Yavin during the Galactic Civil War," Most of the pov is directed at the Rebels. Or mentioning something in the bts that says that both Rebels, Imperial, and neutral players could use the grenade, despite the TCG card suggested that the Rebels used the grenade. JangFett (Talk) 00:38, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
- I tried to make it clearer that other factions used the bacta grenades. See below why I explicityly mention the Alliance.--Exiled Jedi
Unless I'm misinterpreting the cards, I'm not seeing anything that indicates that the Rebels originally had or primarily used the grenade. The article does support this detail, as you source much of it to the SWGTCG card "Bacta Grenade." I'm not seeing anything in either Bacta grenade card. JangFett (Talk) 23:31, April 30, 2012 (UTC)- The background of the card is the one for the rebel faction, therefore the rebels used the bacta grenade.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 23:59, April 30, 2012 (UTC)
- The background of the card is the one for the rebel faction, therefore the rebels used the bacta grenade.--Exiled Jedi
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:10, May 13, 2012 (UTC)
- A WP:VG nomination.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 16:01, April 22, 2012 (UTC)