- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
BB-23 heavy blaster cannon
- Nominated by: Kilson(Let's have a chat) 03:20, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Starting it off with the "big gun." Also, a guest nom for the WP:LE.
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Excellent work. Menkooroo 14:52, July 28, 2011 (UTC)- Nice job. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 15:10, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
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CC7567 (talk) 02:56, August 2, 2011 (UTC)- BFG. ~Savage
22:01, August 2, 2011 (UTC) - Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:54, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Talrrivanian (Headquarters)
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Check out the change I made to the penultimate sentence of the intro. Something about the wording "The Krayt Empire" seemed a bit off to me. Lemme know if you think the change is OK.- If the change is OK, then take a look at the first sentence of history, which again uses "the Krayt Empire." Maybe rejig the sentence so that it could support a wording like "Krayt's Empire" or something? Alternatively, simply calling it "the Empire" at this point would probably be OK, as the Empire-in-exile isn't introduced until a bit later.
The info from the leading quote of "History" seems like it would have a place in the second paragraph of "Description," ie, the power packs being vulnerable to stray blaster bolts.- Boom. Menkooroo 04:38, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
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In the bio, BB-23 is used a bunch, consider switching it out with another word. That's all--Talrrivanian (Headquarters) 14:28, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
- First, the article has no bio, so I assume you mean the History section. Second, I removed one of the mentions of "BB-23," although I feel the other uses of "BB-23" are quite fine and should remain. Thanks for the review. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 23:54, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:23, August 4, 2011 (UTC)