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B-2ON
- Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 02:36, 24 February 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 03:48, 1 April 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 883 words (145 introduction, 497 body, 241 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 889 words (143 introduction, 505 body, 241 behind the scenes)
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Support votes
—spookywillowwtalk 23:49, 23 March 2025 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 22:12, 29 March 2025 (UTC)
Wok142 (talk) 21:04, 31 March 2025 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 03:37, 1 April 2025 (UTC)
Objections
Wok
Here's my copyedit for review- Thanks! CometSmudge (talk) 20:12, 31 March 2025 (UTC)
In Serving the twins, the phrase "the final adjustments had been made" is basically used twice in the span of three sentences. Would prefer that be re-worked.- I removed the second instance CometSmudge (talk) 20:12, 31 March 2025 (UTC)
In Characteristics, is the "masters' mission" referring to both Karre and Am or just Am? If it is Am, that grammar should be "master's" instead, but if it's both, then it is correct the way it is. Just want to make sure.Wok142 (talk) 04:54, 31 March 2025 (UTC)- "masters' mission" is correct, I just went off what SW.com had CometSmudge (talk) 20:12, 31 March 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:37, 1 April 2025 (UTC)