Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Aza Gundo

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Aza Gundo

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:40, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: For WP:TOR

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:17, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:27, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
3. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 03:01, September 20, 2013 (UTC)
4. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 14:46, September 26, 2013 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 21:11, September 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object

501st

• "The individual agreed and travelled to the area of the Apalis Coast known as the Organa Vinerium where they located and killed at least five Thul troops who had CryoBan rifles, which he took and destroyed." Here you switch between referring to the individual as a "they," and a "he." Maintain consistency.
  • Whoops, fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 02:27, September 12, 2013 (UTC)
• I would mention that Gundo is male in the body, not in the P&T. 501st dogma^(talk) 22:59, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 02:27, September 12, 2013 (UTC)

The desk

• You mention his participation in the Cold War in the intro, but it's glossed over/not linked in the bio. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 18:07, September 21, 2013 (UTC)
  • Added in. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:54, September 21, 2013 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

• Reload the infobox.
  • Done Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:43, September 28, 2013 (UTC)
• Should "war" be capitalized when on its own? Article seems inconsistent throughout.
  • It shouldn't. Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:43, September 28, 2013 (UTC)
• The game mechanics section of the biography seems a bit too detailed—most of it seems to describe what the tasked individual did. Can you please summarize the individual's actions a bit more so as to not make the section too irrelevant to Gundo?
  • Ok shorten it a bit. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:43, September 28, 2013 (UTC)
• 1358 ^(Talk) 20:36, September 26, 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks for looking! Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:43, September 28, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:11, September 28, 2013 (UTC)