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Attack on a Lothal airfield

  • Nominated by: Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 22:16, 12 March 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Look at the color!
  • Date Archived: 07:23, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 896 words (136 introduction, 595 body, 165 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 946 words (136 introduction, 577 body, 233 behind the scenes)
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Support votes

  1. ACvote Yay art! Wok142 (talk) 04:37, 26 March 2025 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 21:05, 2 April 2025 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 06:15, 3 April 2025 (UTC)
  4. Skifffy (talk) 03:07, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
  5. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 06:34, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Wok
  • Here's my copyedit for review
  • Should the TIE be listed in battle participants for the infobox? Since the Ghost is, seems like the TIE should be as well.
    • Makes sense to me, I'll add that. - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 09:38, 23 March 2025 (UTC)
      • I think just the one TIE should be listed and not all five, since the other ships truly just sit there, but the one that explodes is definitely involved. Wok142 (talk) 19:16, 25 March 2025 (UTC)
  • I think the airfield itself might be notable enough for its own page, particularly since it reappears in a later episode. So that can be created and linked here. Wok142 (talk) 06:13, 23 March 2025 (UTC)
    • I wondered that too but wasn't sure if it would be notable enough. I'll go ahead and create it. - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 09:38, 23 March 2025 (UTC)
spookly
  • Seems like the "2 rebels" bit in the infobox is unsourced.
  • Mandalore would need some context, as a planet or world or something else.
  • I see the Mission in Capital City is capitalized here, but its own article seems to have its intro as lowercased. Would you mind checking if its capped somewhere in sources?
    • This was an oversight on my part - I've made it lowercase. - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 02:02, 1 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Given there's three consecutive 2014 usages in the BTS, thoughts on swapping the second or third out for "the same year"? Tends to be done a lot to vary wording for repetitiveness; usually I'd copy-edit it but I guess a good note for future, so.—spookywillowwtalk 23:11, 31 March 2025 (UTC)
    • Swapped out the third one. Thanks for the note! - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 02:02, 1 April 2025 (UTC)
Lew
  • Is Sabine actually a "commander" in this? From the short itself I don't really get this impression, unless one of the adaptations make that clearer? Lewisr (talk) 21:35, 2 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Mustafar doesn't appear to be referred to as a planet in "Fire Across the Galaxy," so that will need a cite Lewisr (talk) 21:35, 2 April 2025 (UTC)
  • I'll leave how you prefer to reword it to you, incase you need to make any other changes, but the action at Mustafar doesn't appear to be stated as the informal start of the GCW, but one of the earliest rebel victories in it. Also when citing to the galleries like this we include the slide number in a () Lewisr (talk) 21:35, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:22, 4 April 2025 (UTC)