Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Attack on Attichitcuk's camp

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Attack on Attichitcuk's camp

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 08:47, June 8, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Perhaps the gundarks foresaw the holiday special and tried to prevent it early on...

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 23:56, June 8, 2014 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 11:42, June 20, 2014 (UTC)
3. I left my copy of Galactic Battlegrounds in a hotel room 8 years ago. That made me sad. Reading about Galactic Battlegrounds here made me less sad. Yay! - Brandon Rhea^(talk) 22:16, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:26, July 17, 2014 (UTC)
5. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:27, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
6. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 01:55, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• I would like to see Jinn mentioned in the intro.
• Attichitcuk appears very suddenly in the battle part. Could you mention that they did not only found the camp, but also him?
  • Both done. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 23:44, June 8, 2014 (UTC)
• Nice. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 09:16, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

501st

• Intro: "...four gundarks, members of a predatory species..." It sounds here like the gundarks were members of a predatory species, not that gundarks were the predatory species. Nitpicky, but fix this please.
  • Removed the members of bit, does that do it. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 08:17, June 20, 2014 (UTC)
• Otherwise, looks good. 501st dogma^(talk) 14:01, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Toprawa

• Are there no other pictures to use? The body could certainly fit another one. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 07:01, June 21, 2014 (UTC)
  • Placed one in the prelude. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 10:41, June 23, 2014 (UTC)
    • Please take look at your edit and the image formatting and see what you did incorrectly. Simply looking at the article should be enough to recognize it. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:48, June 25, 2014 (UTC)
      • Sorry, you'll have to point out exactly what it is. I'm having a noob moment and don't know what you're referring to. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 07:17, June 26, 2014 (UTC)
        • This was one-half of it. Look at it again. Read the sentence. What are you missing? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 07:19, June 26, 2014 (UTC)
          • Oh. Full stop? Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 23:12, July 1, 2014 (UTC)
            • Correct. This has been policy for about five years now, and I've just noted it in the Layout Guide, so there's no excuse to miss this again. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:51, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
              • You added the punctuation to the wrong place. It helps to pay attention to what you're doing. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:06, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
                • Epic fail on my part. Attention paid. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 10:01, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:55, July 18, 2014 (UTC)