Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ashka Boda

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Ashka Boda

  • Nominated by: Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 07:28, January 23, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Less than 75 words short of a FAN. Oh well.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 17:15, February 1, 2010 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 01:09, February 6, 2010 (UTC)
  3. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 01:47, February 8, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Jedi Kasra (comlink) 17:38, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Grunny (Talk) 10:04, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Attack of the Clone
    • "Boda joined forces with Jedi Knight Halagad Ventor to form a network of Jedi who survived the destruction of the Almas Academy": the network was formed and then survived the destruction, or the other way around? Please clarify; the tense is unclear here.
      • Clarified.
    • "Jedi Master Tionne Solusar uncovered the truth about Ashka Boda's fate long after Palpatine's death": I'm unsure specifically to which "death" you're referring to, but nevertheless, can it get a link?
      • Clarified and linked.
    • Is there any chance that the second paragraph of the Bio can be shortened? Remember, an article should only detail what is directly relevant to its subject.
      • Shortened and added on to the following paragraph.
    • Could you perhaps try to sub-section the bio between his actual biography and his legacy?
      • Sub-sectioned.
    • Any relevant images?
      • Added an image of the Tedryn Holocron.
    • Other than that, nice work. CC7567 (talk) 21:25, January 31, 2010 (UTC)
    • Why was the Emperor "dying"? Can more context be given here?
      • Contextified.
    • Yes, I do realize that this wouldn't be much, but can a P&A section be created that at least says that he had the abilities to become a Jedi Master, as there is a level of skill and proficiency required to take the title? CC7567 (talk) 07:35, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:04, February 17, 2010 (UTC)


  • Absolutely no info for a P&A. Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 07:28, January 23, 2010 (UTC)
    • So then you should add the one sentence you do have for a P&A in the P&T. It's perfectly acceptable to do so in situations like this.—Tommy 9281 Mechnochair-NEGWT (Mechno-chair) 06:06, February 2, 2010 (UTC)