Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Arrochar

< Wookieepedia:Good article nominations
The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Arrochar

  • Nominated by: SKYWALKERTalk 20:26, June 25, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: 778 words

(0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total)

Support

Object

Emperor's advices
  • Well, i'll go first
  • You need to source the entire infobox.
    • Sourced everything, removed atmosphere because I wasn't sure how to source.
      • Added Breathable to the atmosphere section and sourced. SKYWALKERTalk 15:23, June 29, 2014 (UTC)
        • Fixed a source that was before a coma, added affiliation with the Empire, system name, number of suns, and immigrated species. SKYWALKERTalk 14:47, July 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • Remember to source the body as well and to keep it in past tense
    • Everything on the past and sourced.
  • Dont forget to fix the redirecting links with the gadgets of your preferences.
    • Fixed on my gadgets and fixed on the article
  • Oh also, be sure that you link everything that should be linked.--Emperor Jarjarkine GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Senate Hall 21:21, June 25, 2014 (UTC)
    • Linked everything I could find to be linked.SKYWALKERTalk 14:32, June 27, 2014 (UTC)
QGJ
  • The article's length does not support this many images. It looks very cluttered at the moment. I would keep two images, maybe three, and remove the rest.
    • Removed three of the images, left the ones I thought better ilustrate the article.
  • Behind the scenes needs significant expansion. You need to establish when and where Arrochar made its first appearance, who illustrated the issues that it appeared in, etc.
    • Expanded with the information about appearance, artist and such.
  • The fact that it shares a name with a real-word village seems very trivial. If not removed outright, it should at least be sourced.
    • Removed, lack of sources. SKYWALKERTalk 21:36, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • More to come later. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 09:19, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

  • Skywalker, remember that you should post on here when you've completed an objection. It's easier to keep track of everything that way. 501st dogma(talk) 12:11, June 27, 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks dogma. Didn't know about this, sorry. Just a question, can I put atmosphere as Breathable and source it as the first time people are seen breathing there? SKYWALKERTalk 14:32, June 27, 2014 (UTC)
    • Yes, you should be able to. 501st dogma(talk) 15:12, June 29, 2014 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

  1. ACvote As it stands, this article is simply not good enough to be on the GAN. It has numerous issues that are best fixed off the nomination page. The article has numerous issues ranging from minor ones like insufficient linking to major ones, including poor grammar and simply lack of information. While we appreciate your interest in promoting this article, it would probably be a good idea for you to go back and read some of our other GAs, including planet articles, to get a better idea of what a complete GAN should look like. If needed, you can ask a member of the AC for help. However, at this time, this article should not be on this page. 1358 (Talk) 21:49, August 5, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:57, August 5, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 22:27, August 5, 2014 (UTC)