Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Arnet

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Arnet

  • Nominated by: Dat1899 (talk) 20:11, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Thanks to User:Ayrehead02 and User:Hanzo Hasashi, Surprised at how little stuff he's actually been featured in, as far as many know. Update: I request for this nomination to be cancelled.
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Ecks Dee
  • I don't usually make these types of objections, but this article is in desperate need of a copy-edit. There are numerous small issues that could and should have been caught prior to nomination, including but not limited to punctuation errors, improper capitalization, references before punctuation, missing grammatical articles, and tense issues. 1358 (Talk) 21:31, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
Erebus
  • AT-ST and AT-AT shouldn't be abbreviated for a first mention/link.
  • The fact that the Battles of Hoth and Endor took place in 3 ABY and 4 ABY can't be sourced to those cards.
  • Intro could be expanded a little bit.
  • Not sure if the fact that the Battle of Hoth was an obvious tactical victory but a strategic failure for the Empire can be sourced straight to the film.
  • A quote from Episode VI could probably be added. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 22:02, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
Fan
  • Skin color in the infobox should be linked.
  • "Ultimately, the battle would end in a tactical victory, though strategic failure for the Imperials." please elaborate on how it's a tactical but not strategic victory.
  • "After the ambush of the Endor shield generator bunker, which was protecting the under construction Imperial battlestation, the Death Star II," Battle of Endor should be pipelinked through "ambush" instead of linked in the next sentence.
  • Also, I don't beleive I've ever seen Death Star or Death Star II italicised. Fan26 (Talk) 13:47, 3 March 2022 (UTC)

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