Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Armored Assault Tank (second nomination)

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Armored Assault Tank

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Support

  1. NominatedOOM-10 13:01, 16 March 2008 (UTC)
  2. After some cleanup, it is fine. Domlith 17:32, 16 March 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. From the Bridge of Chack Jadson:
    • Add more quotes if possible.
    • Can the "History" section be expanded at all? Give it a shot. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:24, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
  2. Toprawa:
    • Upon cursory glance, you've got sourcing issues in the infobox and article. I've added [source?] tags for you, which you will need to remedy
    • Additionally, sourcing should go at the end of punctuation, per Wookification. Please address these issues.
    • I will go through the prose when I've got more time later today, hopefully. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:55, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
      • fixed, I thinkOOM-10 16:55, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
        • You've still got unsourced material in the body. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:33, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
          • A helpful user has gone in and tried to source some of this information for you. Please make sure the source is correct. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:05, 20 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments

  • What Secton(s) need cleaning up?OOM-10 08:16, 17 March 2008 (UTC)