Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Aphra family's tooka

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Aphra family's tooka

• Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 04:28, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: TOOKA
• Date Archived: 11:59, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 546 words (80 introduction, 395 body, 71 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

(4 ACs/0 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:10, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:07, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 21:00, 24 December 2023 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 (he/him) 11:55, 25 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

Braha

• If the Aphra 15 conversation is going to get referenced in the intro, then I think it's worth linking it to Flufto somehow.
  • How's that? Lewisr (talk) 17:40, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
• The bio paragraphs are getting to that size where I'd recommend splitting in some form or another.
  • Had kept them as two per suggestion of another AC, but split into sections. Does that work? Lewisr (talk) 17:40, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
• Worth dropping it briefly in that the Fluftos were genetically modified?
  • Added Lewisr (talk) 17:40, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
• The Aphra 15 image has a partially obscured image bubble that should get whited out by policy. Or you could just use this :P
  • Woops had no idea, thanks for pointing out. Will use that one thanks :P Lewisr (talk) 17:40, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
• "Aphra informed the droid" 0-0-0 is never introduced as a droid in the article so this could read confusing for some. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:26, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Introduced 0-0-0 as a droid earlier, thanks Lewisr (talk) 17:40, 18 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:55, 25 December 2023 (UTC)