Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Anya Karu

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Anya Karu

  • Nominated by: Pentastar patrol 501st dogma(talk) 22:01, April 30, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:A brief break from Warfare, though parts of this are still sourced to it...

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote—Tommy 9281 Sunday, May 6, 2012, 18:46 UTC
  2. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 02:49, May 11, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Menkooroo 20:32, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:16, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 01:49, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Jangeth
  • Please reload your infobox. Also 501st dogma, I would recommend that you concentrate on your other noms before nominating others. You still have many others above. JangFett (Talk) 23:46, April 30, 2012 (UTC)
    • Reloaded. I realize I have quite a few noms on both the GAN and CAN pages. I was just waiting for objections. I'll slack off on nominating GANs unitl at least one has passed, but I still intend to get some articles ready to be nominated in the next few weeks. Pentastar patrol 501st dogma(talk) 00:01, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
      • While it's fine to write articles, please keep in mind that the more you nominate, the more you have to look after. Ideally, nominating new noms while waiting for objections for your old noms isn't the best way to go. JangFett (Talk) 14:36, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
Return of the Jedi
  • IIRC, the Galactic Civil War didn't begin until 2 BBY. However, in the article, you switch back and forth from 3 BBY to 3 ABY. Was it 3 ABY, or does EGTW or one of the other sources change this?
    • Corrected, sorry about that.
  • "...given to him by a Rodian warlord." - Can we get a link for this Rodian?
    • Linked.
  • "...Fett discovered a dead stormtrooper..." - For this stormtrooper, too?
    • Linked. I'll create the articles soon.
  • Good work. While Jang is absolutely correct about not getting bogged down with too much, it is good to see you keep active.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 03:05, May 4, 2012 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 23:10, May 4, 2012 (UTC)
Whispers in the dark
  • "In response to the loss of one of their capital ships, the Imperials put in an Inquiry..." Because "Inquiry" is capitalized, it seems like it is a subject worth contextualizing. If so, please link and give a smidge of context, since it just appears suddenly to the reader. That's all, not bad.—Tommy 9281 Sunday, May 6, 2012, 00:28 UTC
    • Done. 501st dogma(talk) 11:33, May 6, 2012 (UTC)
Anya
  • Judging from the BTS explanation, the 3 BBY date requires the double ref of Wreckage and the CSWE, which you've done in the infobox --- shouldn't the dating in the bio get the same sourcing? Menkooroo 04:49, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
    • Better? 501st dogma(talk) 20:04, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
Jujiggum
  • "…one of the largest shipyards in the galaxy at that time." You haven't yet mentioned a time period in the body, so the reader won't know what "that" time is.
    • Done.
  • The infobox says that it was present for the Civil War, but the article and infobox both say that it was destroyed a year before the war began.
    • Removed.
  • "Galactic" is repetitive in the first sentence of the History section. On this note, however, I don't think you need the context regarding the Galactic Civil War either here or in the intro. The way you currently use your mention of the war is to establish it as a reference for the timing of these events; you don't need to say who it was fought between in order to do that.
    • Better?
  • I think you can put "at least one" in the passengers field of the infobox, since we know the ship could carry at least one stormtrooper.
    • Added.
  • Is it a canonical fact that the ship's very first sighting IU (not just our current earliest knowledge of it) was at the battle where it was shot down?
    • Tis our earliest knowledge of its spoting. I'll remove it if you want.
      • Yeah, that would be best. Just because it's the earliest we've seen it so far from our OOU POV, doesn't mean it's the earliest it's appeared in the galaxy from a totally IU POV. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:34, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
  • The Janelle article suggests that Aron hired Fett in 0 ABY—is that the case?
    • No proof. Boba could have been hired in 1 BBY, and just never gotten around to doing the job.
  • On that note, do we know with certainty that Aron hired Fett precisely "Three years after the incident," as you currently state?
    • Added "Around".
  • Do we know why the Adjucator was sent to destroy the Anya Karu?
    • Nope, no reason given.
  • "…The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia, published in 2008 as an encyclopedia of everything Star Wars." This is a bit redundant.
    • Done
  • "The entry in the Encyclopedia clearly stated that Janelle Harcourt died after the Anya Karu's sabotage, making the incident happen prior to 3 BBY." This doesn't fully clarify things unless you also mention to the reader the source that says that Janelle had died by 3 BBY.
    • Done.
      • One question on this: does the source say it was at least a year after Janelle's death? Could not both have happened in 3 BBY? Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:34, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
        • Doesn't say so, so I've changed it in the article. 501st dogma(talk) 12:06, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
  • Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 19:03, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 23:36, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
  • One last question to add: right now you have the fact that the Civil War didn't break out until after 3 BBY sourced to Empire 28—does the comic actually state as much? Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:34, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
    • Changed. 501st dogma(talk) 12:06, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:15, June 1, 2012 (UTC)