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Antarian pea
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:53, May 1, 2015 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Yet more CAs that got to long.
(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
- 501st dogma(talk) 22:53, May 6, 2015 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 21:49, May 31, 2015 (UTC)
grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 15:27, June 6, 2015 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:06, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:34, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
- Manoof (talk) 05:30, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
Object
Floyd
Would you say that peas in general could have an article?- I'm not really sure they do. As far as I can find these are the only in-universe peas we have an article for, so it would pretty much be the same as this article. Technically I'm not sure there's proof there even are other types of peas that exist. If you want me to make it I'll throw something together but it seems unnecessary. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:30, June 19, 2015 (UTC)
"Antar was a gas giant in the Inner Rim with several moons, including Antar 4, that supported life including the Gotal species." This should go in the Description, and really should be worded differently, as it just sticks out weird. Something like "The peas were named after Antar, a gas giant with several moons..."IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:05, June 11, 2015 (UTC)- Moved it to biology and appearance. Sorry for the delay on these objections, I was on holiday with very little access to wifi. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:30, June 19, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
From the context given in the article, there is no way to determine what the peas were named for. They could be named for Antar, one of its moons, or even the Antarian Rangers for all we know. You even have this portion in the article saying that the sources don't make the connection clear: "Neither source made it clear if there was a relation between the peas and Antar or any of its moons besides the vegetable's name."--Exiled Jedi(Greetings) 16:30, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
- Reworded. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:51, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
"The peas shared their name with Antar, a gas giant in the Inner Rim with several moons, including Antar 4, that supported life including the Gotal species." For one thing, there is no way the sourcing here works. Secondly, I don't think that it is really necessary to have this in the body. The BTS mention should be enough.--Exiled Jedi(Greetings) 01:52, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
- Removed from body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:17, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
- Reworded. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:51, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
Where are you getting that Jang Li-Li is Human? I looked through the Encyclopedia and the novel and did not see this information anywhere.- I assumed are good article on her was correct, but looking through I also can't actually find mention of it so removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:17, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
- Did you actually check the Companion? The date it gives for the novel is not 20 BBY.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 01:39, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:17, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
"Neither source made it clear if there was a relation between the peas and Antar or any of its moons besides the vegetable's name." This is not self-sourcing. Please source the BTS.--Exiled Jedi(Greetings) 01:52, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
- Sourced. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:17, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
Manoof
Following up on EJ, I think that if you are going to mention the planet Antar and it's moon, and the relation to the name, you should also mention the rangers. Manoof (talk) 07:09, July 20, 2015 (UTC)- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:17, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
Not so much an objection as I'm not sure, but should pea have it's own article? Manoof (talk) 07:09, July 20, 2015 (UTC)- This object was already made and discussed above, with the conclusion they don't seem to need one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:17, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:31, July 22, 2015 (UTC)