- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Anno Wen-Chii
- Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:02, October 7, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: WP:NSW
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Pre-nom reviewed. Master Jonathan
(Jedi Council Chambers) 17:51, October 8, 2010 (UTC) - Darth Xadún(Consult the Holocron) 21:05, October 10, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:30, October 15, 2010 (UTC)- Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 01:11, October 18, 2010 (UTC)
Cylka-talk- 22:26, October 18, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Xadun
In Rule of Two, it says Wen-Chii and Barra-Rona-Ban studied together at the Academy, not that they worked with each other in the archives.- Good catch. Fixed.
- Otherwise, spinning out an easily forgetteble minor reference into a GAN is pretty good. Darth Xadún(Consult the Holocron) 22:47, October 7, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:43, October 8, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
The biography makes no mention of how he worked with Barra-Rona-Ban in the Jedi Archives, as the intro describes. Please detail this.- No more detail is known, but I tried to explain that a bit.
- That's fine, my confusion arose from the "Jedi Academy" error. However, the intro states that he worked in the Archives with Barra, while the bio states he studied there. "Worked" and "studied" are not necessarily analogous to one another. Whichever one is closest to whatever the source says, I would go with that wording in both places. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:00, October 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Worked is more correct. Used it on both instances. Clone Commander Lee Talk 19:18, October 15, 2010 (UTC)
- That's fine, my confusion arose from the "Jedi Academy" error. However, the intro states that he worked in the Archives with Barra, while the bio states he studied there. "Worked" and "studied" are not necessarily analogous to one another. Whichever one is closest to whatever the source says, I would go with that wording in both places. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:00, October 14, 2010 (UTC)
- No more detail is known, but I tried to explain that a bit.
Can we be more specific about which Jedi Academy this is? There are several academies, and this link only takes us to the parent Jedi academy article, which isn't very helpful: "Sometime during his life as Jedi, he studied in the Jedi Academy"- That was a error by another user, he studied in the Archives not an Academy.
I feel like the last sentence of the biography, about Zannah infiltrating the Jedi Temple, is begging for a little more context. To what end did she infiltrate the temple, for example? Just a little bit explaining its significance would go a long way.Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:03, October 14, 2010 (UTC)- Contexted. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:47, October 14, 2010 (UTC)
Cylka
You have intro exclusive information, specifically that him and Adollu went to Polus in 995 BBY and that they weren't seen on Coruscant for the next five years.Cylka-talk- 03:48, October 18, 2010 (UTC)- Fixed. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:40, October 18, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:26, October 18, 2010 (UTC)