Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Andrevea River

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Andrevea River

• Nominated by: Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 01:43, April 28, 2015 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: CA upgrade

(5 ACs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 14:12, May 9, 2015 (UTC)
2. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:46, May 31, 2015 (UTC)
3. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 15:58, June 6, 2015 (UTC)
4. IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 02:19, June 8, 2015 (UTC)
5. Some poor linking, incorrectly formatted reference note, and a misspelled word. Not good, people. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 15:44, June 22, 2015 (UTC)
6. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:29, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Object

501st

• Context on Naboo in the description. I know that you later mention a planet, but you should directly connect them immediately.
  • Good point, addded. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:21, May 8, 2015 (UTC)
• Article for the ambush?
  • It's covered in the whole liberation. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:21, May 8, 2015 (UTC)
• I'm not seeing how the city being damaged by bombers is relevant to the article.
  • It was decided that it was worth mentioning since the city is memntioned elsewhere. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:21, May 8, 2015 (UTC)
• It might be worth it to mention that the river got mentioned in TCSWE in the BTS. 501st dogma^(talk) 22:39, May 6, 2015 (UTC)
  • Sure. Thanks for looking it over. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:21, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Floyd

• Question regarding the name: Is it actually named the "Andrevea River," capitalized as such, in the video game? The CSWE has it at just "Andrevea."
  • Most assuredly. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 02:30, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
• Would like to see a touch more context on the invasion in the body. IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 01:55, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
  • How's that? Thanks. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 02:30, June 7, 2015 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• Preliminary objection: Please give the introduction a small expansion.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:31, June 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • Voila. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:28, June 12, 2015 (UTC)
• Are there any quotes talking about or related to the river?
  • I don't believe so, it's all basic stuff like "head down the river" or "we're trapped". Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:07, June 16, 2015 (UTC)
• "such as ice in the glacial regions and rocks" I'm slightly confused by this. Could you give some kind of context for where the rocks are located on the river?
  • Rocky banks. Switched up. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:07, June 16, 2015 (UTC)
• Where is the river's source located? Is it in the glacial regions?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:43, June 16, 2015 (UTC)
  • Yes, now noted in the article. Thanks for the review. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:07, June 16, 2015 (UTC)
• One last thing: You mention Naboo pilots in the intro, but only Sykes in the body. If there were multiple pilots please mention this in the body, otherwise just mention Sykes in the intro.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:36, June 17, 2015 (UTC)
  • Sure thing, added context in the body. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:40, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:29, June 22, 2015 (UTC)