Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Amerce

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Contents

  • 1 Amerce
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Toprawa
        • 1.1.2.2 Floyd
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Amerce

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 00:12, April 26, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I am please you bring you an exceptionally long description section.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:44, June 13, 2015 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:59, June 21, 2015 (UTC)
  3. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 14:24, June 21, 2015 (UTC)
  4. Emperor Jarjarkine MP-Mandalorian Senate Hall 00:09, June 23, 2015 (UTC)
  5. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 04:19, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  • If we know that the Amerce was destroyed in 25.7 ABY, which we apparently do from NEC, this should be specified in the article instead of less-specific 25 ABY. Please note this more specific date in the infobox. I've worked it into the article body; please cite it as appropriate.
    • Added.
  • Please kill the redlinks.
    • Done
  • I think your decision to treat the Jedi Eclipse–CSWE thing as a discrepancy is incorrect. We're talking about the Fondor Shipyards, the second-largest starship construction facility in the entire galaxy. I'm willing to believe a single shipyard can handle building 30 Star Destroyers at once. At any rate, if there's no direct evidence suggesting CSWE's claim is in error, it's not our call to treat it as an inconsistency. You should work this information into the article as necessary and avoid trying to declare this an inconsistency. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:49, June 11, 2015 (UTC)
    • Yeah, that makes sense. My main point for the discrepancy was that if there were Orbital Shipyards 1-1321, and each of them made 30 SDs, the war would be virtually over in a hearbeat. However, it's unlikely that there were that many shipyards. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 21:16, June 12, 2015 (UTC)
Floyd
  • I feel like the Description section could be beefed up just a tad. A note on it being unfinished and perhaps on what was left of it after it was destroyed would be nice, if possible. IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:10, June 22, 2015 (UTC)
    • Like so? 501st dogma(talk) 01:58, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

  • Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:19, June 23, 2015 (UTC)