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All Stars Burn as One

  • Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:52, April 3, 2014 (UTC) and Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 17:58, April 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The official anthem of the Galactic Republic! An old CA that grew due to TOR. ExiledJedi did most of the updates, while I was the author of the original article.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 02:51, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 14:11, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
  3. 501st dogma(talk) 22:39, May 9, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 22:35, May 16, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 04:10, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Ecks
  • You kind of overuse "by" in the three first sentences of the history section. Please reword.
  • "By that year,[1] the music was the anthem of the Galactic Republic who fighting the Galactic War against the Sith Empire.[3]" Something's missing here.
  • More to come later. 1358 (Talk) 21:59, April 14, 2014 (UTC)
  • "The piece was considered to have a martial sound by the Sullustan journalist Den Dhur[5] and was considered to be a stirring piece of music by the Human Jedi Knight Obi-Wan Kenobi and the Vippit barrister Doolb Snoil." Any chance you could change one of the two "considered"?
  • Your wording makes it seem too much like the song was composed in 3,642 BBY. You could try using something like "had been composed by 3,642 BBY" to emphasize the ambiguosity. 1358 (Talk) 14:36, May 13, 2014 (UTC)

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