- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Aiwha-3 Squad
- Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:49, March 25, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Got to big for CAN, should be a nice and easy read
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
JangFett (Talk) 23:03, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 03:40, April 18, 2014 (UTC)- 501st dogma(talk) 18:00, May 2, 2014 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 22:04, May 17, 2014 (UTC) - Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 22:10, May 28, 2014 (UTC)
Object
Lee, look closely at the infobox. What's wrong with it? JangFett (Talk) 18:20, March 25, 2014 (UTC)- Yes. Brackets. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:42, March 25, 2014 (UTC)
In the first two sentences of the history section, you mention "was created." Please either condense the two sentence or vary up your wording.- Have a look. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:39, April 6, 2014 (UTC)
Throughout the article you refer to Aiwha-3 Squad as "squad". I would check all the sources and see if they say "Squad" in a sentence or two. JangFett (Talk) 18:32, April 6, 2014 (UTC)- The squad is only mentioned once as "Aiwha-3 Squad" in the novel. Same in the CSWE. Therefore all instances capitalized. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:39, April 6, 2014 (UTC)
El Jefe
I'd like a year in the intro.IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 04:56, April 17, 2014 (UTC)- Added. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:51, April 17, 2014 (UTC)
501st
"During the battle, all commandos, except trooper Jez, were killed in action." This sounds like every single commando that the Republic sent in was killed, which is not the case.- Better? Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:53, May 2, 2014 (UTC)
"Aiwha-3 Squad wore customized colored Katarn-class commando armor in combat." Are you basing this off of Jez's armor coloration in the book, or does the book actually say the entire squad wore colored armor?501st dogma(talk) 17:50, May 2, 2014 (UTC)- Yes, Skirata says he recognizes the squads due to their unique colored armor. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:53, May 2, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
"Aiwha-3 Squad wore customized colored Katarn-class commando armor in combat." Is the armor customized, or is the color customized? Please reword.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:54, May 5, 2014 (UTC)
- Better? Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:51, May 5, 2014 (UTC)
Cav
We have a {{Military unit}} that should be used instead of the organization one.- Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 13:18, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
- Indeed, changed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:22, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:11, May 28, 2014 (UTC)
- You could mention somewhere that the squad shares its name with the aiwha creature, briefly explaining what it is. Stake black msg 16:12, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
- Great idea, I added a small mention. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:26, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
- Come to think of it, since the article has no image, an image of an aiwha would be interesting (as long as it's not in the infobox) and relevant, but that's up to you. Stake black msg 19:42, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
- As we don not know if the squad's name is directly related to the Aiwha, I prefer not to. Clone Commander Lee Talk 19:46, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
- Come to think of it, since the article has no image, an image of an aiwha would be interesting (as long as it's not in the infobox) and relevant, but that's up to you. Stake black msg 19:42, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
- Great idea, I added a small mention. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:26, March 31, 2014 (UTC)