Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Aefan

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Aefan

  • Nominated by: Eyrezer 10:31, March 27, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: If FAN = Featured Article nomination, what does AEFAN = ?

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. AEFAN= Another Eyrezer Featured Article Nomination? ~SavageBOB sig 04:04, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 08:09, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
  3. 501st DogmaRepublic emblem(Comlink) 19:58, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 02:46, April 21, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:20, April 25, 2012 (UTC)
  6. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 22:38, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • The Aefan's homeworld was visited by several t'landa Til, vassals of the Hutt Besadii crime family: Visited when?
  • Over a hundred Aefans, still enraptured by the sensation, choose to accompany the t'landa Til to the planet Ylesia as "pilgrims" for the Cult of The One and The All.: A little bit context for that Cult?
  • Flawless. Clone Commander Lee Talk 15:52, March 27, 2012 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review. I have made a few tweaks. --Eyrezer 01:00, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
Savaged…
  • I can't quite keep up, but I believe the current trend is to not have any links in quotes.
    • It used to be no links in quote, unless the linked items are not also linked in the body of the article - in this case, Chewie and blaster. The authority for this is in WP:LG ("Do not use links within a quote, unless it is the only mention in the article of a certain subject." --Eyrezer 03:09, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
  • Could you add a bit of context as to the nature of the Exultation in the intro? Was it the Force, biology, etc.?
  • Might be worth noting in the intro that Solo was a Corellian or a Human, not a t'landa Til.
  • Can you add a few words of context on kajidic? Tis all! ~SavageBOB sig 01:20, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
    • I switched "kajidic" to "crime family", as I felt adding context of the kajidic would start to stray away from the main subject of the article. The others are done. Thanks for the review! --Eyrezer 03:09, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:38, April 30, 2012 (UTC)


  • Now updated with EGtW goodness! --Eyrezer 08:25, April 15, 2012 (UTC)