Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Abandoned Workshop

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Abandoned Workshop

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool CIS roundel (talk) 12:07, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 22:18, 1 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 750 words (131 introduction, 540 body, 79 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 551 words (73 introduction, 421 body, 57 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote OOM 224 (he/him) 17:41, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:43, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
  3. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 15:20, 29 March 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:59, 1 April 2023 (UTC)
  5. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 20:02, 1 April 2023 (UTC)

Object

Spooky
  • Unsure about needing as much sectioning as there is, as general precedent seems to lean to at least two paragraphs being in each.
  • Would the weather sensor merit a stub to link?
  • "Through the use of Psychometry learned more about the workshop." seems like a sentence fragment, grammatically.
  • Imperial Era is infobox exclusive —spookywillowwtalk 15:08, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
    • Adressed all except the weather sensor one. Would the creation of a weather sensor page conflict with WP:DICT? AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 22:34, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
      • It's been a bit since revisiting this particular location for me, but—it seems to have all the elements it would need to turn into a CA of its own right, once done out. If it had only been mention of one existing, that would more clearly fall under WP:DICT. From what I can see at least infobox wise, it could be filled in that he built it, and that it sensed cold temperatures. Specifically, with the way that this article writes in the sentence after the weather sensors, it goes into that he discovered "electromagnetic radiation" from it, instead of its intended purpose, which is SW-specific.—spookywillowwtalk 00:52, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Last from me: seems like there's quite a lot of description making up the article body. It would suit to add two description-content sentences to the intro so that you can split the intro into two short paragraphs, to better suit the article's length.—spookywillowwtalk 03:34, 30 March 2023 (UTC)
OOM
  • Please see my edits, in which I mostly copy-edited for a sense of flow.
  • A {{Mediacat}} would be in order for images of the abandoned workshop, which needs to be created using images used in the article. If you need any help with that feel free to ask :)
  • I recommend using another image of the workshop itself in the article body for readers to get a better sense of the place's appearance, rather than showing a picture of Cordova, as great as he looks :P OOM 224 (he/him) 16:48, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
    • Addressed. The edit looks good. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 17:36, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
      • Nice work! OOM 224 (he/him) 17:41, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
CC-8
  • Any quotes available?
  • The description section needs to appropriately introduce the article subject, ideally mentioning that the workshop belonging to Eno Cordova was located on Bogano Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:03, 17 March 2023 (UTC)
Grunny
  • The Abandoned Workshop is also one of the places (via the lower level entry) that you can get a double-bladed lightsaber by adding Cordova's hilt to yours (if you don't get it on Dathomir first). I don't think there's a canonical path on this choice, but I think it should probably be included in the article here as one of the things that Cal could potentially do or acquire in the workshop. What do you think? grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 07:01, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
Samonic
  • The article's body doesn't mention the article subject's full name. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 19:39, 1 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:18, 1 April 2023 (UTC)