Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Aaris system/Legends

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Aaris system

• Nominated by: Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:08, August 22, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A right pain in the Aaris.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 16:28, August 30, 2013 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 05:33, September 2, 2013 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:29, October 14, 2013 (UTC)
4. Project Astrography triumphs again. Astriumph! Winterz (talk) 23:55, October 14, 2013 (UTC)
5. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 00:52, October 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa

• I think the intro could be cut down a little just from giving it the eye test. See if there are any points of detail elaboration you could save for the body. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:24, September 17, 2013 (UTC)
  • Try that. I stripped out some stuff and condensed others. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:40, September 23, 2013 (UTC)
• Just using TOR by itself for reference 4 is pretty generic, considering how specific our TOR referencing is around here. Can you not use something more specific in the game?
  • Fixed.
• Can we specify who believed this? The galaxy at large, etc.? "and it was believed that they were extinct"
  • Specified.
• The same could be applied to the Aaris III "Orbital bodies" subsection. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:33, October 5, 2013 (UTC)
  • Also specified. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:23, October 14, 2013 (UTC)
• I noticed this, too, right after I voted: Article needs a 1st and/or 1stm tag. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:36, October 14, 2013 (UTC)
  • Added. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:19, October 17, 2013 (UTC)

Winterz

• Territorial info from the Atlas, if you may sir! Winterz (talk) 21:51, September 29, 2013 (UTC)
  • Unfortunately, there is none. Aaris is not pinpointed on any map (the closest planet is Kal'Shebbol) meaning I cannot accurately place Aaris within any geo-political or historical hotspot for information gathering :( - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:23, October 14, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:57, October 18, 2013 (UTC)