Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/796 BBY/Legends

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796 BBY

• Nominated by: Darth Morrt 10:27, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Happy birthday, Yoda! You're the Master!

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 14:35, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:58, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
3. ~Savage 15:38, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
4. Please make sure not to copy and paste text between similar-type articles. I know that it's inevitable that some parts cannot be worded differently, but most can, and it usually doesn't take too much effort to just change a few words here and there. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:54, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
5. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 18:46, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Object

• First of all, I think you need to mention Yoda in both the Proem and Impact section, namely giving a brief summary of what Yoda did prior to and after 796.
• Also, it seems to me that Yoda became a Jedi Master in circa 796. If Yoda was born in 896, then he could have become a Master in 797 or 795, depending on when exactly he was born and when he became a Master. You should correct the article accordingly.
• I'll re-review when you address these because these two objections should significantly change the article. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 05:23, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
  • Addressed. Darth Morrt 10:14, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
• You could give a mention in the Intro that Yoda would go on to become a leading figure in the Order.
• Release dates for the two reference books mentioned in the Bts would be good.
• Otherwise, looks good. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 05:23, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
  • Done. Darth Morrt 08:47, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• When you said: "as companies brought star systems in the Tingel Arm" didn't you mean to type "as companies bought star systems in the Tingel Arm". Otherwise it doesn't make any sense.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:08, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
  • Typo fixed. Darth Morrt 00:41, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Prepare to be savaged…

• Same issues with 900 BBY: bolding, infobox-exclusive information, context on Ruusan Reformation. Will re-review after these are taken care of! ~Savage 18:18, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
  • Addressed. Darth Morrt 09:24, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Cav

• Question: In Approximate dates in other dating systems in the infobox, why are you reffing after the year, and not the entire entry? To me, the rest of the entry appears to be unsourced. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:05, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
  • The rest of the entry is part of the Template:Year. Moving the ref to the end of the entry would need to modify the template, to which I am not experienced enough. Darth Morrt 15:27, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
    • Ah, fair enough. Might be something to look at as a whole, but not here. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 18:46, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:46, August 22, 2011 (UTC)