- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
35
- Nominated by: Manoof (talk) 15:31, July 4, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:1.30 am, sure why not? WPVG
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Support
Object
Lee's charge
You need to use the quote formatting instead of the dialogue formatting.- Changed
between the Republic and separatist group the Confederacy of Independent Systems (CIS): Something is wrong here.- Better?
You can't source his name and his training to the encyclopedia.- I don't see where i source his name to the encyclopedia, but I believe his training can be.
Please source the BtS as you mention a voice actor.- Objection(s) overridden by AgriCorps 02:28, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
- More to come maybe. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:03, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Floyd
- Where is the clone's name formatted as "35" instead of "Three-Five"? You have them both in the infobox, and it reads "Three-Five" in the intro quote. If that's how the game's subtitles format it, and there's nowhere else that says "35", I'm thinking that the article should be moved to Three-Five.
- "35, 17 and several other troopers were holding a barricade against the advancing battle droids." I know that this is on Geonosis, but there's nothing in this paragraph that connects these events to that battle.
- Additionally, the writing in this paragraph is very choppy.
- WP:DASH. Don't surround emdashes with spaces in the middle of sentences. I fixed it this time, but keep it in mind. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:31, August 11, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to remove nomination (AC only)
Unaddressed objection over 2 weeks old.--Exiled Jedi 
(Greetings) 22:38, August 27, 2014 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:38, August 27, 2014 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 22:41, August 27, 2014 (UTC)
