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Valius Ying
- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 20:25, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 00:35, 3 March 2024 (UTC)
Object
- Pronouns/gender/family fields + first-usage pronoun refs where needed.
- That third paragraph can be split, as it's quite chunky, and the biography can then be subsectioned with two paragraphs each.
- Equipment/skills sections to be split off from PT.
- Would be nice if that infobox image could have its background removed.
- BtS cleanup/some to be cut in modernization.—spookywillowwtalk 20:25, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
Comments
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:31, 3 February 2024 (UTC)