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Steadfast (Ardent-class)
- Requested By: ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola
- Date Requested: 14:45, 20 September 2023 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 00:32, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
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ThrawnChiss
- Subsectioning.
- Subsectioned. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 17:53, 30 September 2023 (UTC)
- The giant paragraphs in the intro need to be broken up.
- I broke up the second paragraph at a logical point, I feel the first paragraph is fine as is. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 17:53, 30 September 2023 (UTC)
- From the images on the article, it looks like it has some sort of guns.
- Added. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 17:53, 30 September 2023 (UTC)
- Release date needs a source.
- Added. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 17:53, 30 September 2023 (UTC)
- Imperial Navy is infobox exclusive and should be checked. ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 14:45, 20 September 2023 (UTC)
- Added into the body. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 17:53, 30 September 2023 (UTC)
spookly
- Apologies in the delay with getting new points onto this. Only a few very minor things:
Is the double ref in the infobox for turbolasers necessary? Seems the body says the ship has them only sourced to Legacy 36.- Should be fine without, removed. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 23:36, 13 October 2023 (UTC)
Thoughts on enlargening the images slightly?- How does it look now? grunny@wookieepedia:~$
- Great, thanks.—spookywillowwtalk 00:01, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
- How does it look now? grunny@wookieepedia:~$
Might be nice if the two paragraphs in 'Commanders and crew' were merged, just to avoid a once sentence paragraph.—spookywillowwtalk 21:20, 13 October 2023 (UTC)- Combined. Thanks for reviewing it. :) grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 23:36, 13 October 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to retain Featured status
Objections solved.—spookywillowwtalk 00:01, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 00:06, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:30, 14 October 2023 (UTC)