Death field should include the date and location in a single reference note per modern standards.
Fact tags to be resolved.
I think the body sections could use some further subsectioning.
If there are, then some subject relevant images could be added into some of the other parts of the biography that have space. Lewisr (talk) 00:36, 27 November 2025 (UTC)
The BTS looks like it could cut some of what's there, particularly in the second paragraph. Lewisr (talk) 00:36, 27 November 2025 (UTC)