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Shashay
- Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
- Date Requested: 00:15, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 06:53, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
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- Body could use some more subject relevant images.
- Biology and a appearance section could be restructured to have 2 or 3 paragraphs.
- Various locations missing contexts.
- I'd like to have it confirmed that the BBY/ABY dates used can be cited to the current sources? If not, then they need to be cited to a relevant source.
- The "The Galactic Civil War" section could be subsectioned.
- Unsourced first paragraph of the BTS. Lewisr (talk) 00:15, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- I have yet to properly check over the short story, so there is likely to be some missing or inaccurate information still present in the article, particularly in the GCW bit, but I think the above points are generally accounted for in my partial rewrite. If I'm not able to find time to go through the adventure (cos it is quite long) in time it might just be better to remove status and I'll get this to the FAN in my own time. OOM 224 (he/him/they) 06:37, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
